Canada
L - Why an I Proud To Be Canadian:: I am proud to be Canadian because I think that we are a very excepting and kind country no matter what culture or religion. Also I love this country because we are a free country to share our opinion and we have lots of good food, stores, and activities here that I love so much. Plus the people here are so nice like my friends I could not ask for better ones!
What Makes Canada Unique:What makes Canada unique is that we have 1/5 of the world fresh water supply. Which I found very interesting because out of all the water in the world we have 1/5 of it.
A- What Do You Wonder About Canada: What I wonder about Canada is when was maple syrup first discovered? Who discovered it? These are some questions I wonder about Canada because I know other countries can look at Canada knowing we are popular for it, but I wanted to know where and when this maple syrup creation had happened and who was they creator of it to find the true history of maple syrup.
U- Research:
The links = "U and Research"
Up above are two links I used for part of my research on maple syrup. So according to the sites I have used the discovery maple syrup and who discovered it were so long ago that they actually have legends on how and who discovered it. I also learned that maple syrup was not just used for sweetener it was used for other things also like medicine, according to the site below.
Facts About Maple Syrup
40 liters of sap has to be used to make about 1 liter of maple syrup. It takes 40 years for a tree to be big enough to tap. Quebec makes 2/3 or the worlds maple syrup. Maple syrup can grow mold if not put away right. If it is put away right though it can be good for years.
Conclusion
In conclusion I really enjoyed doing research on maple syrup and sharing my feelings on Canada during its 150th year!!
Other links
https://acadianmaple.com/blogs/maple-syrup-blog/5789043-the-history-of-maple-syrup
http://cottagelife.com/entertaining/12-unbelievable-facts-about-maple-syrup
U- Research:
The links = "U and Research"
Up above are two links I used for part of my research on maple syrup. So according to the sites I have used the discovery maple syrup and who discovered it were so long ago that they actually have legends on how and who discovered it. I also learned that maple syrup was not just used for sweetener it was used for other things also like medicine, according to the site below.
Facts About Maple Syrup
40 liters of sap has to be used to make about 1 liter of maple syrup. It takes 40 years for a tree to be big enough to tap. Quebec makes 2/3 or the worlds maple syrup. Maple syrup can grow mold if not put away right. If it is put away right though it can be good for years.
Conclusion
In conclusion I really enjoyed doing research on maple syrup and sharing my feelings on Canada during its 150th year!!
Other links
https://acadianmaple.com/blogs/maple-syrup-blog/5789043-the-history-of-maple-syrup
http://cottagelife.com/entertaining/12-unbelievable-facts-about-maple-syrup
I know you are not finished but I think you should put some more detail in your work, also you should read it out loud. You should also put commas in the places were it is extended, try to make the paragraph flow as much as possible. Also put some pictures in so we can see the way that you see Canada, other then that good start.
ReplyDeleteStar: I like how you had evidence to back up your information. Maybe add a bit more.
ReplyDeleteWish: A wish I have for you to put more commas in your sentences to space them out. Just so its not going on and on.